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Dance.

Twisting and turning, continuously twirling,
A hurricane of moves that’s endlessly swirling.
Feeling graceful and glorious,
Nothing feels more victorious

When I continue to move, with the rhythm and beat,
I am in my own world, just me and my own two feet.
The lights shine upon me, the audience is mine,
They all watch in awe, finding nothing more divine.

I am gliding and flying, on, and on,
You think I’m here, but I’m really gone,
For I’m absorbed in my work, my beauty, my art,
There’s nothing more that is desired by my heart.

Music is beating in my chest; I bring it to life,
My body responds, and I continue in my strife.
The stage beneath my feet is my land, my very own dance floor,
But as you watch me you see it’s much more.

So as the song begins to come to a close,
And my body slows and grows to a light pose,
The audience plaudits, shows that it was a job well done,
And I’m just as glad, for that number was only but one.

So I take a breath, and then go on,
For now, I know, the dance lives on.

Dance.
©2009 =sasodeiluver
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Author's Comments

This took half an hour to work together, or maybe a little longer. I think it's the best I've written.

This pretty much is my opinion on dancing. This is how I feel, and it is also a part of my dream.

I hope you enjoy this. :heart:

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:iconabbababbabckt:
beautifully written! It has a cool rhythm to it, makes you want to finish reading it to see how it all ends. Lovely <3

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I pause that you my beauty see: Breathe, and I vanish Instantly.
~Walter De La Mare
:iconxxx-sasodei-xxx:
very nice, and a good use of rhyming couplets, it really does get a vivid image in your head. Well Done.

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SasoDei fanfics by me. These are in chapters.
Vampire [link]
Painful Days [link]
:iconmysticangel12:
Beautiful. I got lost in that poem. It was truely heart felt. Simply amazing. Love it. <3

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I <3Deidara<3Tobi<3Itachi<3Zetzu<3Hidan<3Sasori<3 Hikaru <3 Kaoru. Hey I'm a fangirl have a problem with that!

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:iconsasodeiluver:
Thamk you so much. :heart:

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Music is our soul, body, and mind. It fills our spirit, and never leaves us. Even in death.
:iconsasodeiluver:
Thank you. I was really hoping that I was descriptive enough. :3

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Music is our soul, body, and mind. It fills our spirit, and never leaves us. Even in death.
:iconsasodeiluver:
Thank you! :3 That means a lot.

Oh, and btw, expect to see more poetry, because I'm beginning to really love it. :heart:

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Music is our soul, body, and mind. It fills our spirit, and never leaves us. Even in death.
:iconmysticangel12:
Welcome! ^_^ nya~ :iconvalentineplz: rose for u! lol u win first place in AWESOMENESS! lol ^_^

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I <3Deidara<3Tobi<3Itachi<3Zetzu<3Hidan<3Sasori<3 Hikaru <3 Kaoru. Hey I'm a fangirl have a problem with that!

I LOVE THE AKATSUKI!

I LOVE ~Akatsukitard-Club ITS AWESOME!
:iconabbababbabckt:
aww, good!i'm glad you're getting so into it!

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I pause that you my beauty see: Breathe, and I vanish Instantly.
~Walter De La Mare
:iconsasodeiluver:
Thank you, and I am too. I find it as another way to express myself, which is greatly needed.

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Music is our soul, body, and mind. It fills our spirit, and never leaves us. Even in death.
:iconsasodeiluver:
Thank you! :bow:

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Music is our soul, body, and mind. It fills our spirit, and never leaves us. Even in death.

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